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Cover your eyes girl. The pain fades into black. Shut yourself up in another dimension. Let the misery spill away from your wrist. Seeping out it begs for air. Begs to breathe. Since then there’s no breath left. Nothing in the air that can cure the ache you give me. Break me down, compact with hate. Love, foreign but it’s been here all along.

Awoken from this dream that never was. It crawls down my throat. The magic pill. Turns a broken heart into the blessed one. Killing your sins, you are alive. Filled with mixed emotions. You love the way you feel, but you know it’s not real. These lies confuse your train of thought. You crash.

Slipping away, you see the lies. Crazy, but true enough to fool you. Press your young fingers, over your eyes. Let the dark take away the fear. Free from all the stress. You let it come out in bloody tears. Chase away the world, so full of contorted love, pretend that it’s all good.
©2005-2009 ~hungrylittlespider
:iconhungrylittlespider:

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Cover it up, the only true escape.

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:iconcreamkit:
This must be a very personal thought. The writing sounds calm and controlled, but we know that something more of a tempest stirs underneath. Very, very stoic.

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With Love, Truth, and Respect
from Captaine Kit
:icongo4baroque:
I can really relate to this, I guess that's what really draws me toward this piece. I like it a lot, very nicely done.....ummh..subtle....yes.....*star+*

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Shut your fucking face, uncle fucker. You're a cock sucking, ass licking, uncle fucker. You fuck uncles, yes it's true. No one fucks uncles quite like you.
:iconcrazymellow:
Awesome Blayr... No words to descirbe accept simply awesome. *fave*

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"Sucker love is known to swing.
Prone to cling and waste these things.
Pucker up for heavens sake.
Theres never been so much at stake."
From "Every Me Every You"by Placebo
:iconhungrylittlespider:
thax :D

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Everytime I see your face
I think of things unpure, unchaste.
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:iconhungrylittlespider:
i sorta just sat down last night and wrote. i do that sometimes.....it's usually pretty abstract.

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Everytime I see your face
I think of things unpure, unchaste.
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:iconhungrylittlespider:
thanx....:D

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Everytime I see your face
I think of things unpure, unchaste.
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:iconcorpselover7:
i love it, very good job. it flows really well and sets a mood that sticks. :hug: :highfive:

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A thought, even a possibility, can shatter and transform us. -Friedrich Nietzsche

-Moony
:iconcrazymellow:
Abastract is one of the most famous forms of art, I think we all write that way sometimes ^^

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"Sucker love is known to swing.
Prone to cling and waste these things.
Pucker up for heavens sake.
Theres never been so much at stake."
From "Every Me Every You"by Placebo
:iconsliceme:
wow its great short and sweet and to the point keep up the kick ass work cause i love it

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"Thats my fun fact, I came out of a man."

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