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False friends
Lonely nights
Lies spilt like an overdose
Through the gape called your mouth

False friends
Erased smiles on chapped lips
Sore from twitching and waiting
And ditching friends isn’t something you said you liked to do
But it seems to me that I’m some sort of exception

False friends
Opened scars
Twinkling stars with wishes lost like
Sightless lovers on a barren plain
If only you could know the pain

False friends
Bitter ends
Broken ties
Burning eyes
Full of gasoline tears
That you lit on fire
©2007-2009 ~hungrylittlespider
:iconhungrylittlespider:

Author's Comments

yah.
i know been a while since i put anything up.
but i really havent written anything in forever.
hope you like it.

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:iconinishikacho:
D:

I like it. But. SAD. D:
:iconlovesucks333:
The rhyme is good, and it has a certain rhythm in certain verses that I like. It is a sad poem, yes, but a very good one!

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OMG! Dude! I'm totally not using my arms!!!
:iconbrokenbloodright:
wow... that's lovely. Sad, but so lovely!

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"Ignorance is bliss, my friend. Don't burden yourself with the secrets of scary people."
:iconmhrock:
For me being left by friends isn't so drastic.

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feel love - don't give it a name

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