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She's Taken Away by ~hungrylittlespider:iconhungrylittlespider:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


I want to cut
But I remember
I have breath
And she has nothing

Death, such and easy request
While you only get one life
Before in peace you rest

And now that I have lost you
My heart is full of regret
That I will have the life
That you will never get
While I am not so worthy
I’m sitting here alive
While over your dear death
All I can do is cry

You’re missed and loved
Forever gone
We wish that we could take you back
But you’ve walked into the light
And left us all in black
©2006-2009 ~hungrylittlespider
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~FatKat Apr 29, 2006, 7:33:35 AM
We all must remember how horrible we feel when some one dies and having others lose there lives becausee of it will only make situations worse.

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~(||)

Bringin' Chivalry back, one good deed at a time...
* turin-the-forsaken

Think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy.
Anne Frank, Diary of a Young Girl, 1952
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~corpselover7 Apr 29, 2006, 8:42:51 AM
yeah, we have to remember what we have and not take advantage of it.

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A thought, even a possibility, can shatter and transform us. -Friedrich Nietzsche

-Moony
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!kojima-miku Apr 29, 2006, 11:53:52 AM
this poem is so gorgeous, I wish I had more to say, but...I don't.

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This isn't love so forever let it go...forever let it burn
This isn't love there on the backend of forever
I wish I would never hurt again - Coheed and Cambria -The Velorium Camper II: Backend Of Forever
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~ladycross Apr 29, 2006, 11:34:39 PM
you must really love that someone...the poem is so beautiful and meaningful but so sad...

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it's go0d t0 be bad*
--Yami n0 Matsuei--

~ClubInuyasha ~tsuzukiclub
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~lovesucks333 Apr 30, 2006, 4:57:24 PM
that is so beautiful!!! But I think that Shoshana will be happy in the heaven she is in (I'm not quite sure what kind of heaven that Jewish people believe in, but I still hope she is okay in the next life....) She would want us to remember all the happy times we had with her. We should have a party to celebrate Shoshana! (sometime later of course, after all the sadness has gone)

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Only the good die young...us bitches live forever!!!!!!
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~loveisforhumansnotme May 1, 2006, 3:17:41 AM
tis beautiful

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"You should have learned by now this is a kill or be killed world; if you're too weak to help yourself- you deserve to fall."-Hiei and -Hiei-Minamino-17
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~neverryou May 5, 2006, 11:58:08 AM
wow,wonderfull,meaningfull,deep,emotional...

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without you i am nothing
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